Name : Nurul Annisa
Student number : 0403508026
Persuassive essay
Planting a million trees is a good way
In the big city especially in Jakarta, there are so many vehicles on the street every day that make the condition were crowded. It will be caused the pollution. The impacts from this condition are human, animal, and plant. The best ways for facing it can do by planting a million trees. This ways are for decreasing the pollution, to prevent the global warming, and to avoid the flood.
Firstly, Jakarta is the metropolitan city. There, the condition from morning to night always busy with vehicles which passed on the street. Because of there are a business people every day who have many activities. The pollution will be increased. It caused, there is a smoke from the vehicle which spread to all place then make breathing of people will be disturbing, For example, if there is a big rain especially in Jakarta. In fact, it caused on the street has happens the traffic jam in every where. All of vehicles are stopped then from the vehicles to produces many smoke that make people were disturbing. The other example is if there is a factory near house. It is really disturbing the people there, because their freshness are disturbed. Because of the smoke is really danger and this condition is really damages of people breathing and health.
The conditions of people near the factory are disturbed. Especially for people, if their house near the factory, sometimes they don’t feel comfortable with the condition and it can make their health will be disturbed, they must to be planted the flower or little plants at house for decreasing the pollution. Then their house become fresh and protected.
Secondly, people who lived in the big city, actually they don’t have to be patient with the condition around them. If there is a global warming they don’t have to be patient what they must to do and to avoid it. In fact, there are still many people are using the electronically tools so long like as; mobile phone, computer, and television. It will caused the electronically tools will be increased. They think that it is like their habits when their stayed at house. Whereas this is the biggest effect if global warming happened. It should they must to avoid for using electronically tools so long. When they using mobile phone so long, they must to click off their mobile phone if don’t use again. The other example is people must to build the mirror house to prevent the global warming. It caused the mirror house have to prevent hot reflection from the global warming.
If global warming happened, people have to ready for facing it. With the planting a million trees can decreased the global warming if people have to be patient with the condition and they must to avoid what they don’t must do which caused the global warming.
Thirdly, flood is a danger disaster that makes people will be suffers. Especially in Jakarta always flood is happened, when the big rain come. People who lived in Jakarta, sometimes they feel depression and stress if the big rain comes. They don’t know what they must to do for facing the flood. For example in Jakarta there are many building that make the condition in Jakarta is crowded and really hot. Because of there is no the absorption for absorbing the water when the big rain come. It will make the condition in Jakarta is crowded. The other example is an illegal logging. It is the bad something that make the environment will be broken. It caused there are people have not to be responsible to the environment. Therefore, we must to planting a million trees for creating the good environment.
Planting a million trees will be to prevent the flood disaster. If this way not to do, it makes people getting suffers and make the condition become crowded. People have to pay attention with the trees and must to keep the environmental conservation that cannot cause the flood disaster again.
So, people who want to have a good environment, they must to keep their environment with planting a million trees and to perserve the environment. Then the Government must to give the best way to people to protect the environment.
Great Nisa. Very good structure and flow. It's well organised and easy to read at the same time convincing. But please pay more attention to your grammar.
BalasHapus