Name : Nurul Annisa
Writing V b
Two choices in graduating
Graduating with a degree and big dream has differences, there are three factors that become reasons for students to study and get a degree. They are future, intercourse, and ability. It shows that when the students who only have a degree, they don’t do new activities after graduating from university, and they don’t have the purpose in life. Meanwhile, the students who finished their study and have big dreams, their skill could be increased by their experience and knowledge in doing the new activities.
The first reason is future. Future is something that people have in life when they wish what they want. In fact, the differences of future between graduating with a degree and graduating with big dream are really big. It can be shown from graduating with a degree, actually after they passed in their college, they are lazy for searching the job or new activities. Most of the students who have finished their study, only consider about the degree that they have as a pride in their life. For example, the several teenagers in this era, they only want to study, but they don’t think what they must do and obtain for their future. The other example is several people are lazy for searching a job, because they think that they want to refresh their brain after study at the college and they want to refresh mind, but this can cause the difficulties in their life and bad future by their laziness.
Graduating with big dream is really good for the future. It means that, when the students who have finished their study, they want to get a successful life. For example; they have braveness for searching the information from other people. Then they try to make and do a good thing for improving skills in the business. It can cause the better life and future. The other example is they have biggest enthusiasm for getting a proper position in their life by they must to ask something that can practice for improving skill and giving the benefit to people want to successful and have a beautiful future.
The second reason is intercourse. Intercourse is the relationship where people can communicate to each other. In this case, graduating with a degree is bad and there is no purpose in life. For example; students who have completed their study by just having a degree, usually they only at home. Because, they didn’t have friend to help them when they get difficulties. Probably, they don’t want to have an interaction to other people. It can cause the bad intercourse, if there is no relationship between them. The other example is when people only to get a degree, usually they didn’t get a new experiences and information from people. It cause that their intercourse is limited and if they want to search the information really hard to find and get.
People graduated with big dream, their intercourse become wide. It means that, when the people want to get the information or job is easy to find. It means that, people more comfortable to faced the life and helpful to people make organization with each other. For example, when people want to search the information or job, if the people have many friends they can called, speaks, or chats with the other people. Then it can make the better relationship in intercourse. The other example is when they have wide intercourse; they can easy to share their experiences to each other. It would be better for people to know the experiences from other people and they can comprehend the differences between the other people.
The third reason is ability. Ability is something that people have to explore the perception in their own. Graduating by degree is more standard to get the best ability. It means that, people have only a degree they cannot to sharpen their skill to make a good capability. For example is if people graduated by degree, usually their ability are very low. Because of they didn’t have knowledge enough. It because when they try to communicate with other people will cause misunderstanding. The other example is maybe people will forget to their lesson in college before. It cause that their ability is never be practice, because they don’t have to do the new experiences or job.
Then people that have graduated by big dream are formed to have good ability. It means that when people have to expressing their experiences, in directly they know what they want to say about something. Because of their thought has been practiced from their abilities. For example is when there is a discussion, people have graduating by big dream their capabilities more good and they can comprehend their idea to each other. The other example is from their ability that they have; they can explain and give to other people.
There are some factors that can become the student’s reason in finishing their study. By these factors, they could be finishing their study just to have a degree or with big dreams. But it depends on the student itself whether they have big dreams or not.
Nisa, i think that you have compared 2 topics really well, but I disagree that you think graduating with a degree is a bad thing. But, anyway, your ability to wite this essay is really good! Well done!
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